The morning light

tickles my ears just

as the wind rustles

the leaves of a bush

to warn them of the

storm brewing in the

back bringing bigger

things soon to be in

view on the horizon.


  1. Very nice and so like the morning muse for me. Thanks for the poem.

  2. eclipsedbylight

    Thank you for the like! I’m honored that you enjoyed it.
    Wonderful stream of writing you have here…

  3. Lovely poem Ashley, i called back about your sidebar but i see you have it all fixed up.

  4. I can hear the gentle sounds of nature in your lyrics and even anticipate the strengthening wind, but the loveliest allusion is the heat ‘tickling’ the ears – wonderful. This is a beautiful sensory moment in time cast to a page. Well done.

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